by _Lynn_
How many chapters in all? I'm not real big on chapter stories and sometime read them after a few are posted. Got me kid of hooked on this one.
DG
in posting the chapters without giving them designated numbers.
I already have that request in to correct the issue.
Okay. No clue was provided as to why there are two apparently unrelated vignettes posted, but I was willing to wait for some sort of logical connection to appear. If there was going to be a "Ch.02", it would have been nice to have been given a "Ch.01" designation. And then, in the second vignette, the storytelling just stops. It does not end; it stops. Did "page 2" just get lost in the ether? Regardless, the whole posting is similar to a song with a no ending chord.
-- KK in Texas
Nice lead in to the rest of the story. A good background is important to help a story develop and you did it right. All the main characters have had major troubles, now it's time for something to go right.