All Comments on 'A Journey with Emily'

Very erotic. Please add a Part 2.

..needs some serious proofreading. So many punctuation and spelling errors I could barely follow the story. The non-sex parts seemed really rushed.

That said, it's rare to find a MMF story where the guys touch each other, and that turned me on big style. The blowjob at the end was crazy hot.

I love the way you approach and write.. this is very erotic and exciting to read.. makes me horny too.

Learn English brfore you write another mess like this

Always wanted to participate in multiple partner sex....

But this story was kind of a mess.