All Comments on 'A Kitchen Fit to Party in Ch. 01'

This opening chapter has grabbed my attention, I like where it is going and I am looking forward to chapter two......

Nick

Can't wait for the next chapters...TVM

Love the start of this. Can't wait for the remaining chapters. Love the seduction aspect and opening the shy young lady to exposure and sexual pleasure.

I have very mixed feelings about this story. While I see the excitement of Tom, I see an old man, her husband, wanting to change his wife into a slut/whore. My concern is the effect on her psyche.

Tom is tasked...most of the work is typical...one job has us all hanging from the edge of the counter top...mmmmm😏

I'm curiously looking forward to the next chapters.

Happy Alan doesn't want force or violence brought into play.

Three stars as a beginning. So higher scores may be given later on. ;-)