All Comments on 'A Knightly Tale'

Hi cora

I liked this story you write very well and your charactors are very believable.

My only critisism is that its a bit on the dull side sexually i think lady jeanne and sir robert could light some fires given half a chance...

please keep writing i think you are going to be an asset to literotica

I gave you a two because it was so pathetic it was funny. Even from the start, you have legendary heroes putting up party streamers like a bunch of fairies, and I'm not talking about the mystical kind - think Hollywood fairy. The reverent Merlin is smiling mischieviously like a little horny imp, and I'm sick over your feminine characterzation of these men.