All Comments on 'A Lesbian's Dream'

by Kikori

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice

Voted you the highest for good writing style. Could've had better paragraphing IMHO, also, spotted a few errors, nothing major interrupting the story's flow.

All in all a nice effort and hence the score. Good luck with it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wrong category

Lesbian stories belong in the lesbian category

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