All Comments on 'A Licentious Affair'

Great beginning, needs to be continued.

Love the emotional depth

...but I feel like it should have been drawn out a little more. I would've loved to see a little more bantering between the two women. But a beautiful story nonetheless.

What a great read can't wait for the story to continue

Love it! It left me droolin for more... Can't wait...

I loved your story, I hope there is more coming soon.

Love and Kisses

Lulu

This was not only passionate, but it also had an excellent story that I really enjoyed reading. I agree with one of the other comments that it could have had slightly more buildup, but still, awesome work.

*gasp* Please tell me there is a part two! :)

Wow.... I love it and I do hope there will be more to the story. And mite I add that your story was well written. Also I look forward to reading more writings from you if you continue to write.

this is one of the stories i have ever read please continue it

I love this story I have read it like 3 times already. Please make a capter 2! I really want to know what happens

Beautifully written. I do hope you will write some more.

Thanks

This is really a good story. I would love to find out what happens after, near enough right after, how Jake might change at school and how they cope with hiding the relationship. Hell even have some sort of confrontation with Greg. I hope you do continue this story, although 3 years after it was published i (unfortunately) doubt it will happen. Look forward to reading more of your work.

I want more! Loved it :D

What an incredible start to this story...beautifully written and totally compelling...but, man, was the end of it a tremendous let-down.

Can't wait to see where you will go with it!!! You did imply there would be more, did you not? So when do we get the second act?

I'm not sure how I've been missing this story, I've been back and forward on this tag list for months and months now. Anyway, I totally enjoyed it, and thank you for sharing it with us!

Very sweet story.

Hi BlueMoonWriter'; it has now been 10-Years since the posting of "A licentious Affair", therefore do yo feel the time is NOW for Pt. 02 of this beautiful story. I certainly think Sara / Jake deserve a nice follow up story on their lives, which provides more in depth detail, especially on Jakes childhood development.

I loved both Sara / Jake in the story, as they were quite different ladies, yet blended so well throughout the 3-Pages, even during their conflicts!!

Rated 5*-STARS For Me & MORE MORE Please!!!!

Very teasingly erotic story. I was gradually, pleasantly, and willingly seduced, by an older professional woman that I babysat for in my neighborhood. She was smart and worldly and I adored being around her. She was 38 years-old, tall, voluptuous, and quite attractive. We would swim together in her pool, and she gradually allowed me to see her body, in various stages of undress. I enjoyed seeing her and was not scared away, but rather looked forward to visiting her house. I had just graduated High School and turned 18 years-old. That Summer I went to Community College, taking Psychology classes, and Samantha also tutored me in Human Sexuality :-) and the pleasures of a woman's touch. I'm not sure who was more excited, but she marveled at how needy and wanting my desires were. OMG I must stop this! Beth in California

"Very teasingly erotic story. I was gradually, pleasantly, and willingly seduced, by an older professional woman that I babysat for in my neighborhood. She was smart and worldly and I adored being around her. She was 38 years-old, tall, voluptuous, and quite attractive. We would swim together in her pool, and she gradually allowed me to see her body, in various stages of undress. I enjoyed seeing her and was not scared away, but rather looked forward to visiting her house. I had just graduated High School and turned 18 years-old. That Summer I went to Community College, taking Psychology classes, and Samantha also tutored me in Human Sexuality :-) and the pleasures of a woman's touch. I'm not sure who was more excited, but she marveled at how needy and wanting my desires were. OMG I must stop this! Beth in California" - But if this was a man you'd have many in this comment section (yin&yang) calling it rape.