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All Comments on 'A Line of Work Ch. 02'
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Anonymousabout 11 years agoNice, not thrilling, but nice.
I am liking this story but there were some glaring issues in grammar and a repetition of certain words. You might want to find an editor to just double check your work.
Wlljamover 10 years agoHmmmm!
I agree with Nice! Not thrilling, but nice!
Great story, Good character development - BUT... SHOCKING SPELLING AND GRAMMAR mistakes reduce the overall content to just passable!
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