All Comments on 'A Liquid Diet Ch. 02'

Both parts 1 and 2 were gripping. Love the details, and the level of description. Keep up the good work!

I'm very impressed with this. It has a strange and unlikely setting, but a mostly believable one at that. The premise is very enthralling; and at parts, gripping. I'm pleased to say this is one of the best online stories I've read- erotic or not. There were a few things that could have been addressed, edited, or added. However, overall, it was written well!

You definitely have some talent as a writer, you could certainly write interesting fiction novels as an author if you wanted.

Woah I knew as soon as it said a couple of sperts went in that she was gonna get pregnant😨

One of the best nuts I've had in a while.