All Comments on 'A Long Afternoon'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Best of class

Marvelously written. And you nailed the interracial aspect, which makes it even hotter. More like this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wasn't this a movie?

Or the plot of a movie? I assume it was a fairly common occurrence in Vietnam.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Did you get

Did you get her out you selfish bastard? If you didn’t, I won’t read another of your stories! Maybe she’s still there! There’s still time! I can’t stand it.

She probably owns a Commie boutique by now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved it

Wonderful, I could really believe it's a true story.

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