All Comments on 'A Long Time Coming'

Erotic fiction is so often arid, just about the mechanics of the act, which while compelling is never enough. It's refreshing to read a story that uses emotion so well, where the characters are human and not just cardboard cutouts.

Excellent prose which makes the reader envolved in the story as one of the characters. So well written.

It is so nice to read a story where one or more of the characters is sure about what they want yet so unsure at the same time. Real life is NOT "they meet, they fuck within 2 minutes," like so many stories on here. It's so refreshing to feel the characters' emotions. And oh by the way, nice to read a story that has been edited well and isn't fullof spelling and grammar errors.

Thank you, and please keep writing!

Jessica

What an arousing and well written story. Bravo!

loved it loved it!

Way to go!

Vocal Girl

Please give us more of this pair.

Incredibly well written! I loved it because, while only one page, I feel like I really got a full glimpse into the narrator's personality and emotions. It's hard to do in such a short time. Got me all goose pimply as well!

Erica ;)

Of course it's extremely erotic, but what I truly loved about this story is that there is a tenderness and a trust that you can feel throughout. To embark on something so new and so different and to have that kind of trust is almost painfully touching. Thank you for making me feel that.