All Comments on 'A Marriage of Convenience Ch. 02'

by Ildana

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LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 4 years ago

She should tell them she won't marry the ass that set this up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

It is too bad that you did not continue this. I would have loved to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I enjoyed this so much, us there going to be a chapter 3?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Really great story, loved it. Any chance of there being another chapter?

CandyKDCandyKDabout 9 years ago
More

Read this a while back and still waiting for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Tease

Your a great writer. I look forward to the next part of the series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Continue....

If you could continue the story that'd be awwwwesome!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

so so hot. chapter 3 plz

MargedMargedalmost 11 years ago

It's almost cruel of you to leave us hanging.... Please finish it!! Soon,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Really great

I'll add my voice to the others. This is a really well written story. I would love to see it finished. At the very least tell us where we can read the rest of it - if it's an e-book or what. You are such a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More please!!!

Please, please write more for this story!! You've done such a wonderful job of building it up, can't wait to continue the story!

ramonbrookramonbrookover 11 years ago
Enjoyed the story VERY much .....

Would love to read chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It would be a shame to leave a story like that unfinished..

CazzDCazzDover 11 years ago
Keep it coming

Ive really enjoyed the characters and plot. This story stands out above others with it unusual storyline. I'm looking forward to another chapter.

Well done!

jaafrica73jaafrica73over 11 years ago
GREAT STORY!

I hope Sara and Lukas fall in love...!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Any fiancee who cuckolds himself like that isn't a man. She should dump him for a real man who can do the job himself - her trainer

GingerVyeGingerVyeover 11 years ago
impressive

I am excited to hear more...about her finance, too.

All of these characters are fascinating, she has a great life to look forward to!

IldanaIldanaover 11 years agoAuthor
Formatting

Hi readers, I apologize for the caps in the last part, this is definitely *not* how it is supposed to be and I am trying to get it fixed.

hotmama72hotmama72over 11 years ago
very hot

great story so far, can't wait for more

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