All Comments on 'A Memory of Three'

by MySecretDesire

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Needs Editing

Much editing!

unicorn64unicorn64almost 11 years ago

I have had sex with well over 50 men in my life maybe even 100 and none could cum more than once. So I do not see how one man can satisfy 1 women several times. I sure wish I had found that man then. My men would cum and then I would not be able to touch them anymore. In fact usually they either got up. got dressed, and left or turned over and went to sleep.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good

I think you have done very well, on your first few stories, you will get better with time .

Nice story

pixandwordspixandwordsalmost 11 years ago
A little confusing...

...but a good effort. It was difficult to figure, in some places, who was doing what to whom. Could have benefitted from a read-through (or an edit) before posting to clarify some confusion. But still well worth reading!

thebuffalothebuffaloalmost 11 years ago

Very nicely done. Enjoyed the read. Now I gotta see what else you've written.

playman64playman64almost 11 years ago
Very good. 5

I am enjoying reading your stories

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