by PrettyMissM
you really feel the action and the passion. The author is clearly a VERY passionate writer
with you, MissM...and your lucky man. very intimately written. i enjoy how your stories move at a nice pace...they're written with great rhythm; great joy until the inevitable wet climax. 5 Stars!
david xxx
Lust4Sure:
I should have started with this story first as it fills in a few missing thoughts I missed on the later ones. You are a very talented writer, though I still see a couple of places that I get lost in.
I do have a problem with Francesca enjoying sucking her own juices from a dildo though. Sounds like a fetish I would not get into very easily. The story is still hot though. Now for the next one.
Lust4Sure
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