All Comments on 'A Mighty Mouse Massage'

My goodness...

Never felt so aroused by reading a story for a long time

I was transformed as Luke and in the next paragraph I can feel the lust of Christina...

You are a wonderful writer..

Blessed with power over the words..

I will be thankful and will feel happy if you acknowledge my comment here

Wish I could talk to you more n more about this story

Actually I have become so much hyper reading this story that I am not able to gather my thoughts and pen them down properly

Thanks for sharing this beautiful erotic work

Neo

Mmmmnnnn ...I have to say, this was a real turn on ! My wife agrees as massage has been a frequent source of erotic experience for us. I am not a masseur but my wife wanted me to rub her down so I started giving her oil massages but didn't hesitate sliding my fingers up her thighs and working on her ass and pussy and of course finger fucking her and she responded by taking my cock and bring me up to her mouth and wound up being face fucked. She enjoyed it so much she asked me if I would give a couple of her girlfriends the same "special" massages. Of course, how could I refuse ! BARE469

Nice work Chrissy, tho one spelling mistak detracted. Snakes slither thin items could be described as a sliver.

Still got me hot with anticipation

I do love a good massage story, but this is an excellent one! The conflicting feelings, the progressive excitement, the narrative interruption with the description of the sexual congress of the two parties with their own partners all serve to build to an exquisite climax, and not just for Christina... I do love the way your stories show that the highs of orgasms do not necessarily require penetrative sex, though clearly fingers played their part here. Thank you, once more.

Very fluid writing. Good build up and pace of the story. As someone else has said, no spelling mistakes. Also correct punctuation: so many stories on sites are marred by those two things that editors should have picked up. I look forward to reading the rest of your literary efforts.

The story went along very nicely, building as it went, although there were some redundancies that I could have done without, but overall it was a good story, lots of tension.

However, the ending didn't work for me. She had several great orgasms, then when Luke started to comfort her she got really upset with him and essentially made him feel it was all over. However, at the receptionist station she gave him a sweet come-on smile as though the affair was just beginning. I mean, I know how fickle women can be, but now poor old Luke doesn't know whether to shit or go blind.

But I still liked it!

Ted

There is another story pretty much exactly the same as this one, but better written. I’m thinking you copied the other story, considering you have absolutely no idea how ultra sonic therapy works.

I loved how you presented each as wanting desperately but also fearful. Fearful of rejection and fearful of consequences. Very realistic speaking from experience

One of the best ever!

Such sexual tension building to a great orgasm, mine too

oh my GOD that story was hot! I just started writing erotica but clearly I have found my erotic spirit animal in you. I see you have written a bazillion stories and I can't wait to read them all. I can't say enough how hot that was. Take a bow.