by PayDay
Well, pornographic literature has graduated into a full, artistic, talented, professional genre in 2011.
Love & Kisses,
Betty18
Be Naughty
Thank you PayDay - that made my day - a good story, well thought out and well written - thank you!
Dick
but very beautiful. I know how much effort's gone into this. Five stars. Thank you.
is perfectly written? Pardon me while I roll my eyes.
This was ill-thought-out and not all that well-written. I could have overlooked much of what was wrong, had the author not come out swinging, proclaim him/herself such a genius.
Oh, and that shit about, "if you don't like it, don't read it"? How the fuck am I gonna know I liked it if I don't read it? I wish I hadn't, now, but you need to use a little critical thinking.
Yeah, take your lumps, write something else, and get an editor. Just don't be such a pompous ass.
Now this be some there of that good feedback.
Thanks for the great hate and votes.
Great story, loved the characters. Left me wanting more as any good tale should.
it was close enough for me. i thought it was a great story, and well written. I enjoyed it very much, and to all you English professors, go grade an essay or something!
I loved it so for me it was perfectly written and I feel sorry for those who couldn't get into the moment, as it were, so to speak!!! ;o))
I swear I only ever typed that I was a perfect self-editor, as if there is such a thing. Weird how it's perfect story now. No biggie, I'll take either. I re-submitted this one for the enjoyers, should be up soon. Tell your friends, I won't mind.