by roxyfox
Great story that gets nastier and nastier. Can't wait to read more!
Roxy, I very much enjoyed your story, but I too was hoping for more description for such a teasing title. Hopefully you will take this to the next step and not be so reserved. I don't think your title was "bad", it just wasn't supported well by the story. Aside from that, I'm one that enjoys my stories more on the raw side so I like my characters to have a nasty mouth. Good job.
Gayle
That's one lucky man and you are a very special woman.
Well done.
It went from a nice buildup to a quick climax.
You covered about all the subjects but glanced through the fun ones.
Thanks for writing. Here's hoping for more.