All Comments on 'A Morning Rimming'

by roxyfox

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akeyesxakeyesxabout 7 years ago
Good read. Might have been longer.

It went from a nice buildup to a quick climax.

You covered about all the subjects but glanced through the fun ones.

Thanks for writing. Here's hoping for more.

returningsaiilorreturningsaiilorabout 9 years ago
perfect start to the day

That's one lucky man and you are a very special woman.

Well done.

GDesmondGDesmondalmost 13 years ago
You're Getting Close

Roxy, I very much enjoyed your story, but I too was hoping for more description for such a teasing title. Hopefully you will take this to the next step and not be so reserved. I don't think your title was "bad", it just wasn't supported well by the story. Aside from that, I'm one that enjoys my stories more on the raw side so I like my characters to have a nasty mouth. Good job.

Gayle

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Bad title....

...since there was hardly any rimming done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love that dirty dialogue!

Great story that gets nastier and nastier. Can't wait to read more!

Anonymous
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