All Comments on 'A Neighborly Rendezvous'

by ADSkinner0224

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ninalee312ninalee312over 14 years ago
this story has a lot of promise...

well I'm surprised I'm the first one to comment, but I actually liked your story quite a bit. The idea of a mutual attraction that doesn't get realised until a chance occurrence is very appealing, and I think you pull it off relatively well given that this story has a clear goal of getting the two main characters off as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
VERY NICE STORY

Thank you for a well written story - not to long but still detailed and good descriptions. I look forward to reading your other stories.

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