All Comments on 'A New Adventure Ch. 01'

Great Story, bit of proof reading would have found the obvious typos but it did no detract from a senusous tale, like the twist at the end too. As this is Chapter one when is Chapter two going to be out ?

I can relate to this story. I really enjoyed the build up and the results, but please do not make us wait long for chapter 2.

Very hot story. Thanks for sharing.