All Comments on 'A New Adventure Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very hot story.

Very hot story. Thanks for sharing.

freshrope_69freshrope_69almost 18 years ago
Loved the story

I can relate to this story. I really enjoyed the build up and the results, but please do not make us wait long for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good Start

Great Story, bit of proof reading would have found the obvious typos but it did no detract from a senusous tale, like the twist at the end too. As this is Chapter one when is Chapter two going to be out ?

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