All Comments on 'A New Bondage Door'

by jackturgeson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
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You touched on a subject that not to many writer's ever go to, Dominant Female / Submissive Male. Thanks, I found it very interesting and erotic. I hope you don't catch to much flack in the comments because I've noticed that not to many people (probably mostly males) don't fancy this scenerio. The idea of a female doing whatever jazzes her is to over the top for most. Thanks again and please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You have a tendency to make up words like "turginated". Also the choppiest and most confusing writing I have read in a long time. Please remember that the whole purpose of writing is communication.

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