All Comments on 'A New Domination'

You need to write more about these two characters. I don't know if it will be as hot, but the story seems to be incomplete without that.

How ever the story that is here is good and got 5 stars. I just get greedy and want more.

Loved how it's written and can't wait to read more an see what he does to her. Loved how he made her confess to him.

get rid of dad and leave happy

I have to admit the subject of this story made me feel less than comfortable, but it was so hot and well-written that I have gladly laid aside my inhibitions and enjoyed this enormously, wicked as it is.

Very well done - five stars. I hope there might be an update on this erotic and precarious relationship soon - thank you.

I love these two subjects, mum/son and bdsm. And both together make it something special.

Please continue.

Enough said.

PS Keep up the good work.

Wouldn't this be more appropriate in the Incest/Taboo section as that is the main theme here? Don't take it as criticism, just an observation.

I would love to read how he dominates his mother and makes her his slave and slut.

All of the humiliation he could give her and then show her how much he loved her for relenting to his requirements and treatment to be his submissive slut.

Perhaps he could train her to his wants and needs and not necessarily those of the cult she belonged to.

thanks for the very erotic read.

Awesome story. Very well written keep it up

Love the writing style, the depth of the story, the unfolding of the Mothers needs, and Simons obvious resolution. From the beginning we knew the end result, but the journey to get there was a great read, thank you!

Very hot but I think we should know more of what Simon is thinking and feeling as tells his story - he almost comes across as a mere observer.

A reasonable job of editing, however, falling somewhat short of EAGLE-EYED!!!! As for you, the author taking the criticism, you relied on his skill and ability, and a s such are a bit culpable. However, his role was to correct your text and improve your writing!!!! A true appraisal of the extent of his assistance is not possible, in the absence of first and subsequent drafts. Nonetheless, he missed a few, sonewhat insubstantial errors, but errors notwithstanding:

bare footed (barefooted)

grand master (grandmaster)

completely to them (him/her)

re-enact (reenact )

forty two (forty-two)

made me knee (kneel)

any more (anymore)

tear streaked (tear-streaked)

The description as eagle-eyed is more born of compassionate gratitude than supported by fact.

I am gratified to see that you chose to explore this storyline further, as part 1 left me wanting more!!!! All in all an enjoyable and worthwhile job, albeit somewhat overestimated in your praise.

I enjoyed this greatly.

Being interrogated for why she used her safe word?

Being expelled for using the safe word twice?

That completely defeats the purpose of a safe word.

Great story... Mom submitting is soooo Hot!

Fantastic! Thank you!

This is so very hot. This slave hopes You write more

A highly erotic opening chapter, I hope you continue in a similar vein.

Excellent story would give you 5 stars but awaiting more of the story first

Brilliant and intensely hot opening to this story