All Comments on 'A New Fantasy Ch. 02'

Glad you did not carry on with the incest plot in my opinion...those things throw me off, just how I personally feel. I liked this one but it was pretty short. Maybe try building a longer story if you do Chapter 3.

Nice story of a first time taking TS cock. would love to see a continuation of the story as their relationship evolves.

Thanks for the feedback :)

Yeah the first part doesn't really fit the second I suppose (and I mis-categorised, woops!), but I wanted to keep it true to what actually happened! Will write Chapter 3 after the holidays...

xxx

pretty erotic for a first time, and a true story.