All Comments on 'A New Hot Wife'

An erotic and well written story. Yes, I understand where you are comng from with this theme. Unfortunately these stories seem to just atarct the criticism of those who feel deeply offended (yet curiously are drawn to read them!)

Dont let those shit for brains people discourage you... this was a great story and I would love to see more of your work..Thanks

Good story. Continue the saga of your wife and her sexual exploits. At 50 most women probably want to do what Betty did. Good for you both. More description of her next time.

and oddly romantic story ...i gave it a 5

Just Perfect. Thank You

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Very sexy story! Loved it.

Very nice story, well-written, hot, and I actually liked the characters. You manage to write about a woman being submissive and really enjoying sex while showing respect and caring for her, thanks for that. You should be getting better votes... Keep writing!

as a woman, I have to say, you get it! The idea of being a wild woman for an afternoon; of fulfilling a special lust for some guy...yes, it's true. Are you sure you're not a woman writing as a man? I liked your other two stories as well! Keep writing

As a mature married woman ,I must say you got it right!!! I have had a couple of "EXPERIENCES" like this and it has always been pleasureable.

Joan@ The jersey Shore

Loved it, and liked your other two stories. Keep writing. As a woman, I'm always amazed at how men don't understand women, especially when we're horny. Well, babe, you do! And if the story is in any way true, I'd love to curl up with Betty and talk through our mutual experiences!

What a beautiful story. You certainly deserve credit for dealing with love and desire in such a fresh, yet profound manner. Thank you!

What a great story. I read this to my wife and she practically begged me to bring you to our bed! LOL She said, and I quote, "A man that can get inside a woman's head that well in a story like this is a guy who every woman wants!"

... there is still Brian, is'nt he ?

Keep writing, got you as one of my favorites!!

Well done, sir! I enjoyed many aspects of this story. The characterisation was compelling and enjoyable; Betty's flowering from a retiring PA/wife into a raging lustful animal was believable, enjoyable, and very rousing. Your narrative tone is wonderfully conversational -- reading your words is just like sitting across from you and listening to you speak, quite an achievement. The buildup to the 'action' was just right: not too short, not too long, and gave us a very clear idea of where the narrator and his wife were coming from. And the action itself: breathtaking! As a man I don't often find other men's work arousing, but I have no qualms in confessing that your tale turned me on hugely! I don't know if this was a true story or not -- it reads like a true story, with enough background and layers to qualify as such, so if it is in fact a complete work of fiction then you can be rightly proud of a fine piece of work. Bravo!

Wonderful and stimulating story. When will you be telling about times you watched your wife and Frank...and when the four of you changed partners?

Did she ever get with Brian? Write about that also, please.

that she couldn't feel that way with her husband... obviously, he's a loser in every sense of the word.

wimp

Sry

bill.....

Our story is very similar, except we started with a mmf threesome and evolved to her going out on dates. We love it all. Thanks for your story.

Most men can't write about women and their sexual desires well. THIS is amazing and you did it wonderfully, especially clear about a mature woman. And the style is perfect, like a guy telling the story to friends over drinks late at night! And whether the story is true or not, you must write more about the two main characters. By the way, I've now read all of your stories here and you write beautifully about what we women desire as we get older! Keep writing!

Well written, you've captured the essence of what many women wish to feel at different times of their lives I believe. Your writing is wonderful and structured very well, excellent job with that. The story is hot and should get anyone excited who is reading it. Definitely want to stop by now and see what else you have written....hope to see more from you in the near future.

I read this several months ago and didn't make it a favorite. It popped into my head about a month ago and it was even more exciting reading it a second time once a found it...

I really enjoyed the fact that she left her husband in her shoe and made it completely about herself. And the emotions you experienced after her phone call....

I love your encouraging your wife to take the leap. I net my husband at a gangbang more than 20 years ago. I love being in he center of the universe for a group of men. Xoxoxoxo Annette

I had read this story before and liked it very much, this time it got me to thinking. First. When Brian told Betty what Frank wanted from her, It didn't seem as if he was giving her an option, or a way out, it seemed as if he expected her to do it for the company or her job. Even though he made it sound later that he didn't really mean what he had implied to her. Second, how many days did she dress up for Frank? You said she dressed up one day and then Friday she was dressed again? With the same thong? The way you first desribed Betty, She would have shot Frank down when he showed a total disrepect for her by asking her to take of her thong in the restaraunt and not just any restaurant, but the one you two went to on special occasions. How would you be able to show your face in that place again knowing everybody saw your wife's thong spread out on the table for him? And then she undressed outside in plain view of anybody that might be looking? Makes me believe that if she did all those things you mentioned it couldn't have been her first time, she had to have been used to it by now, Or maybe it was just the first time she told you! about it. Because she didn't even try to hide it from the office staff either, everybody there knew what she was going to do that day, Was this the firsrt time she worked a client for the buisness? The clincher came when she couldn't fit him in her mouth because of the girth, Didn't she ever get sore? As I remember, the last time I did it with someone and not the only time, after I came three times was that she had a hard time taking me because of the soreness. and I'm not as thick as you say Frank is. I was a player until I got to this age I am right now. So I know what I speak of. How did she do it and still have some left for you? Two years later she was still seeing Frank? and she also did Henry, and a then a threesome with you and Frank, After telling you that it would have killed it for her if you were there. Well after two years and counting, this is not a hotwife, she is Frank's Bitch, and she will do whatever he says.. Whether you want to admit it or not, you will not be able to take her away from Frank anymore. Well this are some of my observations for now as I know that if I read it again more questions are going to pop up. Anyway I reaslly did enjoy this story and I hope to read similar stories from you. I am a proffesional writer and I have some doozies I can let you have if you're interested. Just don't use my name in any publications.

Unusual in that it was certainly evocative and erotic (which is not unusual), but it was focused and made more so by 'Frank's' narrative comments, reports, and examination of the feelings of a husband in this situation. Then you presented Betty's character in an unusual way: a fifty-something lady who has maintained her attractiveness and competence, who played the exclusive "loving wife" for a long time, apparently without regret. Suddenly, a most unexpected opportunity/temptation is dropped in her lap and her response is something to contemplate! One can imagine being married to such a woman? What would the reader do? How would he handle such a unexpected rush toward 'nirvana'?

It's a shame that the author seems to have abandoned his burgeoning LW writing career.

Mac: you are a fine writer and this story is the best of its kind that I have read. In addition to the overwhelming eroticism, I loved that neither Betty nor Frank belittled, manipulated or otherwise emasculated her husband. I hate the stories that do that. Yours was really outstanding. Sorry you are apparently not writing anymore. If you get a wild hare, it would be nice to find out what happened to the couples in your other stories, all of which are also well-written but which leave unanswered questions, especially "what happened after that?"

I liked some elements of the story but from my perspective as a, so called, "Hotwife" there are some unrealistic aspects. (I say 'so called' Hotwife because I HATE the "Cuckhold" concept that some attach to the Hotwife concept. It makes me shy away from the term Hotwife because of the blurring of those terms.) So, I was glad that there was not the absurd Cuckhold humiliation crap that so many stories contain. I do realize that there really are guys that want to be humiliated but that can't possible be a natural human desire. It has to be a response to something hurtful in their lives. I did also like the fact that there were some things that seemed pretty much the way this kind of lifestyle gets started. The problem I had with this story, and many Hotwife stories, is that I don't understand what makes these imaginary people tick. It is not realistic to think that an attractive, mature, married woman with a business job is going to be turned on by some guy that wants her to put her thong on a plate while they are eating lunch together in a public place. I imagine there could be a woman like that but I have never met one and, even though I love sex, I would be turned off and think the guy was a jerk. And in real life I think most men that have their act together would know that they might fail to get a women in bed if they do something like that. I think most guys are smart enough to know that most women would not swoon over the demand for their panties on a plate. They would think he is an asshole and tell him to put his panties on the plate. Or at least that is what I would do before I got up and walked out. I have thought about publishing my own experience of becoming a Hotwife but reality is probably not as "hot" as fiction to people. On the other hand, I think a more authentic account that is based on actual events is hotter in some ways. I wish there were more "real life" accounts on Literotica. I think the writer is talented as a writer even if there were aspects of the storyline that did not ring my bell.

Its every man's desire to see his wife's slut side, seeing her fucked and her lust for the man's sperm. We ALL have that desire! And then see his cum in your wife's cunt! Nothing else can reach that level of arousal, realizing your wife's true inner lust. Once she lets herself go for the first time fucking another man, they relent and admit their long repressed desire for totally abandoned suppression of full acceptance of their true sexual lifestyle that is within every woman, if they only release it. After their first strange cock, they all want more. And we love it.

Nice story -- I would have enjoyed reading how Henry got her.

Once a whore always a whore. It figures that AB met her husband at a gangbang. He was the fluffier.

not much to say about a wife who likes to fuck

Congratulations! I really did enjoy reading It. Well-written, thrilling and profound.

It was a quick "yes" going into it... which is addressed at the end – and really, really works. I absolutely loved this story!

Wifetheif here,

You suggested the idea that became "Love and Jeopardy" and asked my opinion of this story. It is very goo and quite hot and flows rather nicely, Great job!

so one reader said the hottest part of the story is the description of the hubby being home alone imagining her fucking the guy. One story I'm working on is where the hubby sees his bride going into a hotel room. The hubby goes up to the hotel and tries to listen in and hears his wife's moans. He hasn't confronted her but he's constantly turned on by the idea of her fooling around. Finally, he 'catches' her doing his best friend in the marital bed. He still doesn't confront her because the excitement of her infidelity is the turn on. You?

Good tale, but yet another deluded loser coming a poor second to the superdude with the big cock, because the wife who "loves" him is a nasty , selfish bitch, hohum.

there are always those feelings in this situation

It would have been naughtier if she had left her rings on

My wife Karen is 53 now.. Im 62 and she is a Hot Wife too.. I showed her this story and she made my night (!)

Buildup, run-up, and then a short shrift of an ending... It was the literary equivalent of blah-blah-blah or, etcetera, etcetera, etc.

Stockings are so hot. Forgot the thigh hi stockings & garter belt!

Liked that you recognised it was about her. Also that you’re honest about your feelings. Made me recognise my other half could never do this.