All Comments on 'A New One'

Not No, But HELL NO

For the love of god, Bob, quit having your characters chill red wine!

I stopped reading when the gangbang/ass-fucking with divorced Kathy started. Because I find gangbangs and ass fucking sick! Unfortunately only one star!

Ass-fucking is featured in almost every LW story here on Literotica, which I think is a shame.

Nope. No. Hell no.

This woman did not just have a gang-bang. She egged these guys on to fuck every hole until they could not get it up again. She claims she did not like it because it mad her feel like a piece of meat. Well that is what she was. Doing a gang-bang with the guy she wanted to get back together again? Come on. Even a dumb whore would know better than that. Unreal. Get a better plot for the next story.

Not a chance,no way no how would any man or husband take her back as a wife or to start a family with..As temporary a fuck toy, yes . Until he found a woman to have a family and grow old with...2 stars..

I would definitely have considered taking her back--before I watched a bunch of dudes fuck her. I couldn't take her back after I saw her get gang banged...then again I find it really hot to pull out of a girl's ass then put it in her mouth so maybe I'm the fucked up one lol

What better way to win a guy back then to include him in your gangbang? I must really be old fashioned in my thinking..

In life, it is nice to come home to a warm woman, a warm dinner, a little affection. I have thrown so many women away for no reason, but that the "grass is always greener" We have all made mistakes. Only the twerps living in their Mothers basement can make rash statements of BTB "She is nothing." It takes a little maturity and compassion to be an adult. No One is perfect. It is just a matter if you can live with what the other person has done. Forgive others. We are all only human. Buster2U 10 stars for JPB

Merlot is a RED wine!!

You do NOT 'chill' red wines!!

Good read. Glad given 2nd chance. But the birthday gangbang would be a deal breaker for me. NO way! REM

Typical Just Plain Cuck ending

Doing the right thing

The plot seems a bit convoluted, but the heart’s in the right place. He’s given anger and retribution a chance, and it’s still not working for him. Why not give happiness a try?

Five stars, to help offset the morons.

WHY?

I agree that the MC should have never taken her back. She left him, she didn't tell the truth. She should have told him up front that she felt he didn't love her, but only married her to get her out of an abusive situation. Then she wants a gangbang. Once a liar, always a liar. Seems this author likes to write "Reconcile at all cost (RAAC)" in his stories. There are a few where he has the cheater get their comeuppance, but not many. That being said his writing on all the stories I have read, are good and overall, flow well. It is just his stories do not have good endings in my opinion, the cheater gets away with without any serious consequences. I still read his stories because he has a lot, but what I do now is go to the end and see how it ends and if it is a RAAC or the cheater gets off easily, then I skip it. I find that that saves a lot of reading on stories I don't like. That will help getting through all of his stories, because most are RAAC stories. I feel that the author has a few more out of the 856 stories, where the cheater gets their comeuppance. Hopefully I will find much more of those.

I found this story disgusting and reprehensible, how could you write, “ She even had a bottle of Merlot chilled and ready to be poured. MERLOT SHOULD NEVER BE SERVED CHILLED.😂😂😂😂😂😂

Five stars.

Not so great. Never, never, never take her back. As soon as he saw her, her should have turned around and left. D

She was hit with martian stupid ray?

It was ok till the gang bang turned it to just another porno. 1/2 star. A lot of good stories get spoiled in this manner. Another thing most authors seem to have a sick obsession for is sticking it in the rear.

I liked it but you left it just to much in the air, take her back and have a good sex toy whenever you want

Weird. I don get why after being together for 3 years she thought the MC didn't love her. I actually believe her story that she was setting him free and faked the cheating to get the divorce. All I can assume is her household growing up was abusive and terrible. Maybe sexual abuse with the father? Dunno. She regretted it immediately (2 weeks) but realized no way back. But found out after 5 years he isn't past her. Her need for him is almost frightening. It seemed to me like the gangbang was a way for her to debase / "cut" herself on her birthday with no lobe in her life. Her attitude changed dramatically when her the MC showed up. I suspect they will get back together. The MC is too broken by her leaving and she is crazy obsessed with him. Why it took five years is odd but maybe she though he hated her? He did refuse to talk to Mary about her and that was earlier in time. Still her reasoning for setting thr MC "free" was weird and not well written unless it is to be blamed on mental health issues which the author did not see fit to explain. If they do get back together, counseling is a must. They both have issues. She more so.

FUCK THAT!!! I was born at night, just not last night!

Another wimp

I don't give many 1-star ratings, to anyone. This story earned one.

Great story , but you need to finish it!!!

Love does strange things to people. Thanks for your writing.

Super cuck .

How embarrassing.

One star

Great story if only life could be as good as this (jaybee186)

idk they both seem to be ok being in gangbangs seems like they were meant for each other. all the characters are either living in the past or too dumb to tell kathy to get some help. after being abused her entire adolescents, u would think someone would mention that to her and mary

this was the worst story “ just plain cuck” has written. One star.

Ftds

Moving from the skank wife to the slut sister, pathetic

For being a BTB man I ebeen suckered into liking some recent reconciliation tales & this is one.

She didn’t cheat on him, she left because she didn’t think he loved her.

All this was because she didn’t know to talk to him. That’s just stupidity & no real reason to not love her still. Writing this I decided to change my 4 star rating to a 5.

Bill S.

And then they fucked. The End.

Unfinished

Why would you want to “chill” a bottle of Merlot?

To me the story wasn’t finished.

Incomplete!!!!

Can you please just write a complete story. I'm getting tired of these half stories

lol already see another LW story of her friends convincing her to cheat on him. that is one messed up women and no one seemed to think she should get help. it feels like most ur stories center around the lifestyles of the 80s where everyone held in their emotional problems, and it was a sin to see a shrink. he didnt seem to care that the whole thing was set up pl so called friends who want to fuck him with a mental unstable person. bad sister she should have taken her sister to a shrink not a patsy husband

Can one really love a total slut ????I do not think so fuck her maybe but love her NOT in my lifetime

JUST ANOTHER CUCK STORY WITH THE WIMP TAKING BACK THE WHORE

Take her back she had taken so many cock in her ass and pussy. Jeeeeezzzz he must a whimp. Definitely a 2 star 🌟🌟

They got back together and it makes me happy. 5 stars

Loved it until the ending. The ending sucked because there was no ending

The characters in this story remind me of people from real life: they want what is convenient for them, to salve their guilt and sense of being bad people, not what the people in question need. People are not dolls. They are living animals and need their autonomy. In real life, Frank would have looked Kathy in the eye and said, "You know why we're not getting back together? It's because you have serious mental health problems that are going to require at least a decade of therapy and probably Haldol in your breakfast cereal. I don't want to chain myself to that sinking anchor in mile-deep water."

And the LW taliban has been heard from.

I would have liked to have seen them reconnect but the story was well crafted with likable characters

Well that was a waste of time.Started ok then descended into absurdity

And? Wheres the ending?

This one should have been longer too...

BS posturing, posing, and absurdities. The author enjoys in the wild turnarounds using whatever relative explanations he has in store. Love, sure, love here, love there yaddah-yaddah-yaddah ...

Dude, stop drinking immediately, it is not doing you any good. Drop that grass you have been smoking too.

DONT WASTE TIME READING THIS TRASH....YOU WILL KNOW EHY WHEN YOU GET TO THE END

Then he remembered that she cheated on him during their marriage, took half the house fund and he had to pay her several thousand more dollars in alimony. Now she's just pulled a train. What's the next wild hair she's gonna pull out of her ass? He put down the phone and moved on with his life - without Kathy in it. Smart man!

He didn't want her because he suspected she fucked another guy, (she never actually confirmed that she had sex, just that she had met someone), but he wants her back after watching her get gangbanged? Seriously? What, it's about quantity? One man's creampie wasn't enough for him, he needed it from dozens? Garbage.

👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 ......

LUV'DIT !!!!

This might have been a heartfelt story if it weren’t for the idiotic gang bang. What kinda plot device was that?

And you don’t chill merlot, dumbass.

STUPID story. Why on earth would anyone sink his dick into a whore's cesspool? Throwing her out was right, but the gangbang thing was so stupid that I can't believe that it was put into this shitty story!

How could he even consider taking a whore like her back. It could only happen in a JPB story.

Ok. If he wants to see her on occasion and screw her ( with a rubber) so be it. But she will never be loyal to him. Allowing her back into his life on an emotional level, is not gonna work.

Last... I know how it is to dump someone, and then accidentally be put back in contact with them. I begged out of the situation and left, before she had a chance to ask me questions, or pull me in. This guy should have been horrified to hear her voice. At the very most, he should have went down and snapped a pic and left. “Every time I am tempted to let you back into my life, I will use this of a reminder, of how big of a cheating slut whore you are. Bye- Have a miserable life-“

What a paradox, in the story it all came down to lack of communication - yet reading the comment section there is obviously TOO much communication! Example: Dlh143 - every time I see a comment from him, it's the same. He must have it written down to copy! Thanks once more Bob for a good read, think nthis is the third time.

somewhere east of Omaha

you really love to emasculate the men in your stories .

this guy is the biggest cuckold ive ever read about .

hell be wearing a cock cage and cleaning out her lovers leavings shortly .

well deserved 1*

Why don't you just have the wimpy cuckold cleaning cum from her pussy? That's what you made him when he picked up the phone in the end. She's a cheating whore and nothing else! The ending fucked up your whole story. I wish I could give negative stars for this shitty story.

Why does everyone want the gangbang slut?

she is damaged goods and really fucked up in the head. Keep having sex if you want but get tested for STD's often and do not marry.

she screwed up long ago and it was her doing so let her suffer. To bad for her.

and do the things she's done.

she beat this man's self worth into pulp....to 'help' him?

she easily has sex with other people because she, 'loves only him'?

maybe women can compartmentalize that shit. men value things like loyalty, and kindness. what she did was disloyal on multiple levels, and VERY unkind. and yea, she HAS GROWN UP. but that does not wash away her toxic past with him. and it was toxic. it was abuse. let's not forget that. why invite his abuser back into his life? because he's 'a man'? because only women deserve respite from their abusers, and men need to 'suck it up'? get real.

he's not exactly playing the field like she is either. it's unfair to compare the two. he didn't exactly dump her do so either.

maybe she loves him now. maybe she's sorry now. maybe she realizes how horrible she was now. but does she really? she keeps asking for more chances to throw her nightmare bringing face into his life...for HER COMFORT. she still does not give a fuck what he thinks, feels, believes. it's still all about her. no real communication. it's her biggest failing in this. she really needed to make her case, and then LEAVE. That would have been the healthy thing to do. But she's still toxic. He's right to dump her, for many reasons. Hell, he has the right to dump her if she DID EVERYTHING RIGHT. Her past actions are enough reason, full stop, to dump her. If the genders were reversed, literally no one would be against the idea of ghosting the cheater.

WHO WOULD TAKE BACK A GANGED BANGED SKANK LIKE HER?

I can't get past the idea that she is badly broken and will never really be right.

.....problem, with overhearing her sister and Joe, knowing her former home life and ended up seeing marriage as “saving a puppy”, shows how low her own self worth was and her own immaturity. Unlike her sister who overcame it, she put herself further down the hole. Being that stunted she kept making more and more mistakes, but it doesn’t excuse poor judgement. As for sowing oats, he can’t complain by his own past, while she sowed hers after the divorce. After time has passed she came to realize she screwed up but she only gained wisdom, she is still immature and stunted.

Not chance in Hell, would anyone sane enough open themselves to that again, until she overcomes those shortcomings and the only one who Can do that is themselves. It’s like fighting someones fight for them, but at some point they have fight on their own by themselves. 5 Stars !!!

finish the Dam story!

Gangbang ,I asked My wife about that jokingly .. Man I will be paying for that remark for a long Time ..

That’s a bell that you can’t unring. Better to move on. Liked the plot line. Writing is great.

There has been too much water under the bridge. As sincere as Kathy may seem, every time she was out you'd be worried about what she was doing or if she was meeting someone. Not as though she's a babe in the woods anymore is it? She's done as much as some porn stars, and who'd she seek out to scratch that itch if Frank were at work or whatnot? She obviously has the ability to compartmentalize, and who'd want to worry about if she had another need to get three-holed again. Regardless of what she told Norm, it's not as though she had a terrible birthday party.

How bout his self respect? If she hated being gang banged so much, why did she continue opening here mouth, pussy and asshole for further use? And to do it with the so called man of her dreams in attendance seems like the perfect way to forever stain his view of her as anything other than a cumdump.

Entertaining story as most JPB stories are. Where else are gang bangs treated as common and normal.

Anyways, my 2-cents is to stay away. She’s gone from virgin bride to party favor cum slut. No going back. Yes they both had sex after the divorce but come on. How do you get past seeing your former love take on 4 others, and doing stuff she never did with you? I’d always be wondering when the second shoe would fall.

I sure don't agree with the ending, but it's not my life. It's just a story.

I like his stories they entertain me.I don't think they are real that needs in depth critique.its entertaining.Good on you JPB keep up the good work.

For the life of me, I'll never understand why people think JPB is a good writer. It boggles my mind. The same tired crap every time.

Hope it helps ...

"… Article 15 hearings and Summary Courts Martial's usually because some brain dead officer …"

"Courts Martial" is plural of "court martial." Lose the " 's ".

"Six months later she said years again when I proposed …"

Lay the copy aside for a few days and read it again. Then you can catch errors like this.

JPB always spins a good yarn, but HELL NO!

Maybe fuck her as a FWB, but she's not wife material.

The old west was built on the contribution of whores and sluts. Anyone who says different needs a history lesson.

He sees her in a gangbang, and even participated an he is supposed to take her back? Just no way in hell, even in a JPB story.

HELL NO!!! This author has a cuck fetish And The characters are always Brain dead to make it Look like a LW story but he just tries to cover this fact. The wife is always Brain dead And cheats for nonsense reasons, hubby leaves or Feels sorry for himself, then The wife suddenly wants him back And claims her eternal love for him, there are 2 options now, hubby Takes her back ( because he is also a retarded moron like The wife) or several woman fight for him ( how to blow up your own Ego) And they life happy to The end. Reading this is no Challenge, it is something I Would expect from a 12 Year Old Child or an 50 Year Old virgin, Nothing against fiction, Reality is often Too simple to be interesting, One side wants to end it And thats it! But this here is just nonsense, she is The stupid bitch And he is The hero WHO gets every woman And later she realises she acted stupid And wants him back because he is so Great! Sounds like The author tries to compensate Bad experiences or Maybe None at all or has a weird cuck fetish fueled by getting of by humiliation And Ego pumping. But Look at The comments, if you have very simple Ideas of relationships You Need People with The same limited thought in Order to get a like!

Sorry, that is not going to happen. She is too irresponsible to manage a household and be the mother of anyone's children. She should continue to self destruct until the grave. JPB failed to sell that one. Fun story though 5 stars for effort.

This story was well told, and I scored pretty high. I didn't like Frank's choice at the end. No matter what, I just couldn't keep a woman who did the things she did that night fucking all of those guys.

Maybe, just maybe, I'd feel a little different if she have stopped all sex the moment she realized that Frank was there. But she didn't, in fact she kept fucking the other men while looking at Frank.

If she would have stopped...maybe ... just maybe?

No - no fucking way, them fucking her would be all I'd ever see when looking at her.

Walk, no, run away - as Ringo said: Find Somebody to Love.

I’ve read plenty of stories where guy catches wife doing gangbang which leads to divorce, one where a guy met his future wife at a gangbang having not participated himself and she immediately latched to him and gave up her slutty ways, plenty where the guy watches and or participated in a gangbang of the wife willingly, but this is the first reconciliation amidst a gangbang I have ever read. Don’t too much care for the whole gangbang aspect of the story, but found the story intriguing and entertaining.

Agree with others. 3-ways, 5-ways, what else and what next? She’s never going to be a good wife. She may “love” the guy but so what? She’s proven untrustworthy, able to hurt him, and a slut.

Typical RAAC crap!

Best if they both get fixed and then get back together. They are both too stupid to reproduce

"I took the piece of paper Norm had given me with Kathy's cell number on it and I..."

... sparked up my lighter and watched it burn.

Get back together with a gangbang slut? Norm was out of his goddamn mind.

As the flame licked along the paper, the fire slowly incinerated her number, purging her from my life with a merry glow. It reminded me of how Kathy had burned away our love by behaving like a selfish cunt, her desire for strange cock immolating our marriage.

I never saw Kathy again. Two years later, Norm told me that she'd been diagnosed with HIV from her rampant unprotected promiscuity. Showing the same boneheaded stupidity that had ended our marriage, Kathy refused to take the antivirals, bringing her life to a premature and painful end. As my beautiful second wife was bringing the first of our four children into the world, Kathy was in her own hospital bed, dying of a pneumonia infection that her ravaged body was helpless to fight.

The ending they deserved!

Not even "Hell no!" My response would have been "Not in this lifetime!" Not after the gangbang. Let's look at it this way: She got fucked by a minimum of 5 guys, maybe as many as 9. Condoms were optional. Theoretically none of them had any STDs, and theoretically Kathy was on birth control. So theoretically neither Frank or Kathy get sick from this, and theoretically she doesn't get pregnant. Because the odds of her NOT getting knocked up are much higher than her getting pregnant. If it had been me, once I recognized Kathy's voice, I'd have outta there faster than you can say 'gangbang'.

No way. The gangbang was just the lastest in her sexplorations. She was not marriage material. She just needed a roof over her head and someone to pay her way. I enjoyed the story but he was an idiot to consider taking that worn out pussy back.

Then he had seconds thoughts, threw the paper away, jumped up to grab a beer and sat back down and watched the game. HE knew deep down that he had made the right decision. No way back through all that bullshit. It would have been nice had YOU finished the story JPB.

Complete your darn stories!

This is the third story I read of yours and I am tired of lack of completetion.

Please add more to complete the story

I think you need to add another chapter.

you live in a parellel universe and write stories about people who look like humans but in reality are aliens with a different moral and values.

This story features a particular fetish: a man cums in a woman’s ass and keeps going. The man can ejaculate twice or even thrice without pulling out after the anal creampie or he can pull out and then immediately reinsert to continue the act.

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