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Anonymousalmost 15 years agoyou need to proof read your stuff.
I would have given a higher score if it wasn't for having to correct the story line. You really need to do some serious proof reading of your writing before you hit send. Hard to follow.
DelaneyMiteralmost 15 years agoGood Start.
Not bad. Sexy. Good story. You need an editor. I'll help if you like. You have quite a few grammar errors. Other then that, very nice!
Anonymousover 12 years agoPlease finish the story
C'mon, bro! Finish the story! These 2 hotties have to fuck like bunnies and I want you to share it with us!
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