All Comments on 'A New Twist on Some Old Games'

This is a well written story almost as if it were a chronicle of a true life experience.The characters were very believable and the sex was really wild. I hope to read more of your work. Thanks for the good story....Rich

this was a great story. i had a hard on since the start. thank you for writing it!

Great read. I just wish that she let Rupert fuck her bareback and fill her with his cum.

I second, third, and fourth the other comments. Well Done!

You had me so wet by half-way through, I had to pleasure myself whilst finishing the story. I think I could actually be convinced to join you and your wife for a night of exploration!

A well realized story with a mind-boggling amount of steamy hot action from start to finish. They way you conceived and explained your game in such exquisite detail while still keeping it hot and not too technical was near perfect. Perhaps the best complement I can bestow is that I couldn't keep my hand off my dick for the last two thirds of the story. I'll be reading this again someday, I'm sure.

A good, well-written tale marred by talk of condoms. Condoms belong in safe-sex ads, not erotic stories (unless they burst)

Ignore the anti-condom wackjob. I like my fantasies to be at least somewhat believable, with people that make sense doing things with each other that make sense. Condoms make sense.

If someone is looking for 42DD busts (they probably don't know what the 42 means) and 11 inch dicks, well, there are other places to look. They can enjoy their hentai. I'll enjoy this steamy little piece just the way it it.

Is I simply didn't like any of the characters. Not a single person to root for. UGH!

Really Yogi? You certainly aren't better than the average writer.

He may be AverageBear, but he is a way below average writer.