All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Ch. 06'

I love the build up - makes the story believable!

Just read all six parts, and I like the slow build up, which lends a sense of authenticity to the story.

I hope you can keep to the same pace, which makes the story so enjoyable for me.

The concept of the Slut and the Lady works really well to describe Gwen's thoughts

Well done!

WOW

I wish My Homework in School was sEx!

Dave

teamhumanity@live.com

I love stories about mature women who find their inner slut - especially women who are somewhat prudish or sexually reserved. This story is well written and nicely detailed. I am looking forward to the time Gwen is actually covered in cum after being "painted" with it.

You write so well - no spelling or grammar issues to distract your reader. And your pacing is wonderful. You create momentum, and urgency, without undue haste. The gradual buildup is superb.