All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 02 Ch. 07'

The shopping trip was great...It is very realistic when you described the feelings. The planning and dressing...then the disappointment in the department store when she had no audience, followed by the thrill at the meat counter and with the older man helping her load the truck.

I can recall exactly those feelings. What a good story.

Love AG

It's inevitable. Matching dildos to imagined cock size? This Gwen, whoever the hell she is, might as well get it over with. Natalie hasn't improved with age either. In fact there are no more sympathetic characters, just pathetic ones and pathetic readers.As they continue to devolve through the bonobo stage on to having to return their opposable thumbs the story becomes sadder and sadder.

a fantasy an emptier world than this is not possible

Another great chapter in this on going story. I like that everything progresses at a nice pace so the story still seems believable. Thanks for all your hard work on it. I 'll be waiting for the next chapter.

A new episode of this story is my Literotica highlight of the month. Many many thanks.

I love it when she gets the urge to expose herself.

The shopping trip was awesome! The things I would do to run into Gwen at the grocery store ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have really enjoyed reading these today. Found them this morning, and spent most of the afternoon reading all these wonderful stories. I am glad I took this long to discover them, as I got all 30+ stories in a row. You are a wonderful storyteller, and really know how to keep the story interesting. Thanks, please keep going!

Cant wait to read the next chapter. Maybe the next time Gwen and Tim have sex he can tell her he wants her to be louder and she finally breaks the habit od holding in her noise when she finishes?? Just a suggestion of something ide like to see with this story

Of those who criticize, most are Anonymous. But of those who have a registered name, look at their profile: the majority of the time, there are no contributions. As I've noted before, that's akin to one purporting to be a food critic, yet having any no ability in the kitchen. The comments somewhat ring hollow.

Unless you have made the effort to put thoughts on paper, successfully or not, do not deride those who attempt this difficult craft.

I have voted 5 for each contribution. Well deserved.

Thanks.

*****

This is the one I'm most drawn to. I loved the massage scene, the way Natalie introduced Gwen to all the nerve endings around her rosebud. Very well written!

And very erotic, good job.

Natalie tasting her fingers with a gleam in her eye would have been the perfect addition, but still very good, and with the promise of more.

Can't wait for hubby's response, I think he is already showing a bit of the dominant role gwen needs to be the bad girl ;->

To commenter Seekeraz, you make denigrating comments about the story and the characters and threaten to quit reading, yet you keep reading. Me thinks thou protests too much ! Do us all a favor. If you don’t like characters or where the story is headed, just (actually) stop and find something else to tickle your fancy. I think you enjoy the guilty pleasure of reading such stories and try to cover those feelings with statements that make you appear to be aghast at what you read. More akin to, “please don’t throw me in the briar patch. “ when, in fact, that’s exactly where you want to be. Fantasies aren’t bad. We all have them. Enjoy them. Shhh ! You don’t have to tell anybody. 😊

To BusyBadger: another great chapter. Enjoying it immensely. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s again.