All Comments on 'A Night to Remember Ch. 02'

Well done

""""" "So, he was serious," Peter said, he thought under his breath."""" ?? Was it said aloud, or was it a thought?

Loved the story, you are a gifted writer. The suspense of the trip(s) to the airport. So good

Forty years earlier, an USA actor and a French actress made April Fools with a plot almost like this story. Mmmmmmmm!

it didn't need the drama.

it would have been better if you had gone back to the everyman concept.

the one odd note was moving the departure time earlier. I doubt that ever happens unless the change is made very long in advance. In addition, in most cases you can't get on an international flight if you arrive even 1 hour before departure time. Also, it was not really necessary to the story line.

I enjoyed your rewrite of the movie "April Fools". It was well done as was the movie.

A very enjoyable story;

Good ending, I liked the suspense.

I'm glad that Jack made it, I didn't think that he would, and Catherine deserved a little happiness!