All Comments on 'A Night with Rachel Ch. 04'

Keep at it!

Erin needs her nasty self taken care of and the wedding. You have a wealth of story lines to keep this one moving.

Nice writing.

i dont think i have ever fallen in love with characters so easily! bravo keep them coming!!

this is an amazing series of stories that you've written. can't get enough. having said that I think brad shouldn't fuck Erin again.

Hello Alice in Wonderland obviously the mad hatters tea party applies here. Get a grip on reality and at least try to write stories that have some connection to real life

there should be a part 5, at least.

Fun story! Have you considered continuing it?

Yes. I’m planning to continue this one finally. I’ve written some lead in and some ending chapters. I want to go back and rework these 4 chapters as well because I know there a lot of grammatical/punctuation problems I missed the first time.

More please.

This has been the best story that I have read on literotica to date. I really look forward to the next chapter.

This series has been the best i've seen on here. please continue while i read the rest of your work.

Thanks for coming back to this story and editing an rewriting parts of it.

The story has great bones: two loves, complications, a temptress, etc., and you can have great fun with it.

I know you have several series on the go, but I do think this is really worth continuing, In fact, I don't know which I am most impatient for.

Where is chapter 5? You can’t leave us hanging!