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blackknight314blackknight314about 7 years ago
Short but sweet.

I would still like to know what she looks like, what her puss looks like etc. Still pretty hot.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This was a very anonymous and evasive story to me. It felt like something was missing. And bam, it all came together at the very end. You truly are an amazing and award winning author. This story very easily allowed the reader to fall into either one of the characters in this story. It really felt like something was missing, but now I get it. Keep writing.

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