All Comments on 'A Painter's Pleasure'

But it ended to quick. Looking forward to your next submission. Thanks

a very good story, has it all...easy to follow...and ya very exotic.....has all the characters and input needed to make it interesting and easy to read.....I am sure it will make a few aroused...many more than a few.....good job donna...

Now all she has to worry about is if the tatoo covered young electrician has an STD he has picked up from some of the other women he is having sex with. Not a bad story, but a disclaimer would have been good.

Not a fan of the cheating, but a hell of a nice fantasy story.

And from a womans perspective too.

Look at the other painting related story on LIT, under BDSM.

That may give you some ideas for your next story.

Which I hope you write soon.

Great first effort.

reading this was a real edlight. so very hot and horny.

a painter's pleasure. was so worth reading . brilliant story. awesome writing. cant wait to read more of your stories.

Good story and nice picture on your profile, too. Keep up the good work. Thanks,

The images of the sweaty electrician and the build were fun to read. The sex was erotic. The ending was unbelievably cliched. "Oh those painters"! UGH!

Thank you for a good story. Ignore the venom. Hope you decide to submit more.

I thoroughly loved this story. It built up the encounter so well. I could not wait until they finally came together and let their passion take over. Thanks for the story!

if that is you in your picture you look great !!!!/ any more???

Donna honey,

Your story seems so real. A married woman giving into the lust and heat of a bad boy with thick fat cock.

I came hard right when Mark dumped his cum deep inside your pussy.

I enjoyed your submission but I did find it a little far- fetched to just have him strip off with no foreplay. Keep submitting I will keep reading.

I thought it was a nice fantasy that just happened spontaneously. I loved it for it's entertainment value. I hope you continue to add to your stories over time.

Excellent story Donna...and like I said.....a bit better than then Summer one....I told you why ;)

This also was well-paced and to the point (no pun intended). A very believable scenario and the pierced cock was a nice surprise. As a guy who has painted a house or two, a wonderful fantasy ...

Where do we go from here?

I did wired up reading this. I got hard reading it, so its a good story. Good Job, Donna!

I wish I had read this before we got together....well written, a FIVE for sure

Hot, sexy, and very well-written, Donna.

A cheating whore with an asshole lover.

Fun story

Excellent, but even excellent can be improved. If you're thinking of writing more, I have taught creative writing.

very hot

I'm former contractor and I've been in those hot attics, dank cellars, seductive clients. Your story brings back a particular client for whom I held a fantasy for a long time!