All Comments on 'A Party She'll Never Forget'

This is a very erotic story and knowing that it might be part of "Pleasure In Control", makes it a better story. I can just imagine Jessica, Smanatha, Rachel and Kristen being there with Lyndia. Your stories are very good and I have a very vivid imagination. I wish I had the ability to write like you do.

Wow Julia, you could have been writing my dream 'intro'to the delights of lesbian love with this one.

Julie:

I am in awe of your grasp of graphic descrition. It's not enough to have imagination - one must also be able to put what you imagine into words. You do this very well. There have been one or two typos but - overall - your work is outstanding.

Thank you very much!

You have a way of weaving a web of soft yet passionate description that draws one in.

Excellent.

Ok I have started reading from top to bottom and i loved story the first. Onward and er...downward I suppose.

I do write stories myself though I have never put one on here. Maybe because they are not so erotic. Maybe I should try?

Sally xx

You write very good, describe feelings and scenes best. i can almost imagine being there. Who would i like to be? The girl getting the treatment? Or another girl?

Greetings Slut R from Germany

Didn’t expect that ending. So used to a more protracted story. Never the less very good.