by Many Feathers
Very good quality writing overall, and a great story. I did find this installment a bit short and very confusing towards the end referring to her wearing panties where that was never explained and standing in panties and then suddenly having her being naked. Just seemed a bit rushed and choppy towards the end there.
this one was a bit short but very good also please keep up the great storys.
a little short compared to the last one, i would have loved to see where this one went. But all i all i still love the story, keep writing!
Cant wait to read more. Such a good story I cant put it down