All Comments on 'A Perfectly Controlled Utopia'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Enjoyed

I really enjoyed that introduction, however wished it was a little longer. I really do hope you do a sequel to this and give us a real detailed view of a day in the life of living god of sex. Very hot stuff. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I Agree

... with previous comment. Hope there are many more chapters coming. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A WORLD of possibilities

Great story with so much promise -you are on to something my friend, I urge you to keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Spell binding

Amazingly well done. Openning up a view of sexual fanatsy that surpasses the common expectation of the ordinary man. Unfortuantely, far too short. Just like your awesome character who has freed humanity, you as an author have raised the bar on erotic imagination. Please continue.

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