by leBonhomme
Like the different way you did this one...enjoyed it...looking forward to the next chapter!!!
You are getting better with this. You must be concentrating on it more. There are only two of them on this last page. Personally, I prefer uh-huh but each to his own. Umm-hmmmms are good for moans. Waiting for your next chapter to see what they get into. They are getting close to what I am waiting for.