by leBonhomme
You are getting better with this. You must be concentrating on it more. There are only two of them on this last page. Personally, I prefer uh-huh but each to his own. Umm-hmmmms are good for moans. Waiting for your next chapter to see what they get into. They are getting close to what I am waiting for.
Like the different way you did this one...enjoyed it...looking forward to the next chapter!!!