All Comments on 'A Piece of Candi Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I'm just curious about a couple points....

<p>One, something I don't understand:</p>

While he was upset that Doug was doing anal with his wife and she would never try it with him, so does that mean that he's Candi's first or was Doug doing them both with anally for a while and he's happy to get his turn at bat and is just following the trail that Doug blazed for him?</p>

<p>If so then why does he care if his wife was getting Anal? I mean cheating can't be it, because he cheated on her as well with Candi before he knew his wife was cheating on him, but he acted all upset that she was doing anal with Doug but wouldn't let him, like that was what pushed him over the top. Just a point you brought up but seemed to skip over.</p>

<p>And he can't seem to wait to do Anal with Candi, but why? If he was there first, then I could see him happy to do it because it would seem like something that she saved for him and him alone, but if not, most men would see that as just one more thing Doug took from in in a long line of things, and most wouldn't be so gung ho to do it, especially if that is what made them decide that if their wife was giving that up to her new lover but wouldn't give it to you that your marriage was over.</p>

<p>And if he cheated with Candi once before and his wife is cheating now with Doug, why is he being so hard nosed to both of them? His wife didn't keep him from Candi, I mean its not like getting there first was a problem for him if he's letting Doug lay the ground work and loosen them up for him.</p>

<p>It seems like it had a tiny bit of character development wrapped heavily in a stroke story</p>

Poizon69Poizon69over 14 years ago
Still not entirely sure where this is going

But keep writing I'll go along for the ride. Just one thing if you haven't already finished the story could you make it happy ending? These two deserve each other and a happy ending. Good writing as always. Well done.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
With her wanting pickles and brownies

With her strange combination of food, she may be having pregnancy cravings. They better watch their backs with Doug still out to getting even with her. Thanks for the good chapter.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Still funny

Still funny, but I'm still enjoying it. Still waiting for Doug and Beg to get burnt.

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