All Comments on 'A Present and a Deal Ch. 11'

looking forward to what happens next my friend. thanks.

looking forward to what happens next my friend. thanks.

Love the series

This is going to stop being about a loving family:(.

Thanks. I hope to read more soon. Another family will spice up the story.

I can't wait to read the next chapter hope it's as good as this 1 or even better

series Rocks keep it cuming

Really appreciate everybody's comments. It definitely motivates me to keep writing more.

Until this chapter, I thought the son had more intelligence and was more mature than he demonistrated in this chapter. So much for his respect of his parents. His naivety is beyond the pale. The damage this act could cause himself, his mother and father is beyond estimation. How he thibks he could trust a "friend" with this knowledge is beyond me. In the real world, I would not trust God with this type information. This chapter earned a 1 star rating.