All Comments on 'A Present'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great

Great start! Hurry up and keep the story going. This was just a paragraph but its framing a great story line

2275jr2275jralmost 14 years ago
the start of my day

great start of this, some what hot story. I can see promise in this story carry on its starting to sound good

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