by JukeboxEMCSA
Wonderful setup and completion. Love all of your writings. Thank you for sharing your imagination and writings!
Another excellent and well thought through story. I now have to add you to my Favourites.
It's work like this that makes me want to bow out of writing - not that we write to compete, of course, purely because you we're with such a pedigree that I feel the honourable thing to do is to give you the stage room you deserve!
Well done, my friend. Keep it up! Brilliant story!
Your stories are always well written, but this one is something very special.
Great job. The descriptive language and internal dialogue are perfect. Very sexy to have this happening "live" on a broadcast stage.
Keep up the good work!
WOw, that's some machine they've got there!
I've got to say it seems awfully effective, how much for half a dozen?
I love this concept - it's nice to read something fresh, and I really like the idea (fantasy awaits...)
The story itself is well done - nice balance of character development and sexy goodness. An enjoyable read! 5 stars!