All Comments on 'A Quiet Affair'

by l8lastnight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Good start! More please!

starmanfivestarmanfiveover 10 years ago
After reading this

I still don't know what this story is about. Is it love, lust, naughtiness? Does she love her husband, want to leave him, give him creampies? The purpose for reading is enjoyment. Enjoyment for me is understanding the story, getting inside the characters, even guessing how they may react to a situation. I am left with many questions.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 10 years ago
A good start

A very good start, indeed.

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 10 years ago
Very good

I liked it. It is just the right length to tantalise.

johnnyjonesjohnnyjonesover 10 years ago
Interesting...

... A good mystery for the reader. I hope you don't stop there and continue to build the answers to many of the questions bouncing around in our collective heads.

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 10 years ago
Next

What next....the end of a marriage or not?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Taste it.

Splendid writing. He should have eaten her pussy out and then thoroughly licked, sucked and tongue fucked her asshole out before he busted a nut inside of her. Memorys. Sweet.

DWornockDWornockover 9 years ago
What was that?

2**

rjordanrjordanover 9 years ago
Very nice

Not another word needed.

DrSemblanceDrSemblanceover 7 years ago

All i saw here was a cheating cunt and a douchebag that knew she was a cheating cunt fucking for a couple paragraphs.

Both need an arse kicking.

imhaplessimhaplessover 7 years ago
Bizarre but enjoyable

This site should be about entertainment, and that was entertaining!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Quiet

Quiet or not, she is still a cheating whore and you are a piece of shit.

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