All Comments on 'A Race Against Time'

lol. gripping, then stupid

Try writing something that makes sense.

Kim in Kansas

ONLY DEATH CAN LOVE YOU SO, THAT SHE WILL NEVER LET YOU GO...

Made it the part of not understanding how some schmuck could crawl into bed with they`re socks on,,, i about pissed myself laughing when the same useless fucking schmuck would crawl into bed with a naked women wearing his dopey fucking jockies

Cant find a minus so sorry,, cant vote

LLP

but what happened at the end? should be in fantasy insted of mature.

That story hooked me. Good read.

You led me down the path...never saw it coming...did not like the end...and yet I did!

never understand the hereafter, hell I forget what I'm here after all the time. Don't let people, who don't want to face the truth, let you waver in your writing.

I was clued in almost from the beginning. I enjoyed it 5* worth. Maybe in the Halloween contest with a few changes.

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was too little, too late.

I knew where this was going as soon as Savanna hadn't rented a room, I hoped for something other than the obvious ending to be honest, but I am a sucker for a happy ending.

Great write! Those who said they saw it coming r Monday morning QBs... those of us who have CAD view the story differently.

Very entertaining and very different style of story telling in the Mature section.

sorry for the 4 but i really really need happy endings :(

Curiouser and curiouser . . . then it all made sense right at the very, very end. I do like clever, creative writing where I can both suspend belief and learn something about life. Excellent, nuff said

Hated the ending.