All Comments on '"A Raging Inferno In Phoenix"'

by Supergirl77

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good

I like that your story has a transwoman as a main character. I also like that she isn't stereotyped like many people do when they write trans characters. I hope to read more stories by you.

zetjester1zetjester1about 9 years ago
Great Stuff

I really enjoyed this story, it was good to see a couple who accepted and loved each other for who they were. And they obviously made the most of what they had :-)

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgabout 9 years ago
So Glad You Added Public Comment...

...Supergirl, this story was so beautifully romantic and erotic. Your characters were both well described and multifaceted as I found myself interested in them right off. They had all the background to make the story flow I suppose, although my own needs would have rather had much more information on Arlo to flesh out her background and how she ended up in her situation, and indeed how Logan's acceptance came so quickly and happily... its no wonder Arlo daydreams of it so readily. The sex scene was heavenly and showed their love accurately. Thank you for sharing this with us and I hope you will consider writing more. Cheers! --- Josie

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story

I really liked the build up of the stories characters and the way the sex scene was written with tenderness and love.

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