All Comments on 'A Remarkable Phase of My Life Ch. 01'

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VeeJVeeJalmost 12 years ago
Your Next

Waiting for Phase II. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

good one.... :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

I loved your writing, the pace and the storyline. Great work!

tatlockstatlocksover 11 years ago
Hot and well written............

I dont usually like stories were the violence is so extreme but your story involved me.

I remember being used in a similar way and it was the hottest sex I have ever had. Brutal is one word but that was not the whole of it, its contradictory and complex. Your story has some of the elements of my experience and just reading it brought the memories back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fucking hot

You control your readers so bloody well..it's like you were always meant to write. Wonder if your mind in reality is this kinky :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Real? Dream?

Oh...Ruchi...it all seems to be your dream and not real happening. Whatever it be. You have great power over the language and narations. Also your analysis of Angel v/s Devil is something real..would wish to read all your stories.

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