All Comments on 'A Replacement for Susan Ch. 02'

I look forward to reading more

... that ending really is a teaser. I suppose we will just need to be patient and wait for your next installment. I love the context of the story - mother acting as (?is there a word for?) unpaid pimp.

I really like where you are going with this story. Great work as always. Thanks so much for writing.

At first, I thought own his mom was going to do the deed.

This is just as good, a devoted mother offering herself

as a surrogate to protect her offspring from the "dark side".

I admit I'm curious where this will go...

Prepare for immediate take off. Very interesting twist. Kudos !!!

Thanks Don

Please finish up this story, good twist so far.

Why does Mr Towers and other British contributors to this site feel it necessary to adopt American versions of English words? It is irritating and jarring in a story so obviously set in the UK. Mom? Argh!