All Comments on 'A Replacement for Susan Ch. 04'

by petertowers

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please try To Make the chapters longer

I enjoying the chapters though I find then to be a bit short .i hope

You can extend them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Proof Read!!!!

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ChrisTor22ChrisTor22almost 10 years ago
Good development.......

I agree that the chapters are too short, but everything moves along well..... looking forward to 3-somes....SO many combinations possible!! LOL Also watching for HIS Mom to let her submissiveness shine through!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OUTSTANDING!!!

I am really looking forward to the next chapters. Please keep writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It is truly a shame that you either stopped this story or haven't been able to finish it

It is excellent and very unique. You will find an instant following if you carry this fine story on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
needs finished

Please keep writing this storyline?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story, shame no update in years

I really loved this chapter and the preceding ones. I'd have liked the story to continue to evolve.

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