All Comments on 'A River Runs in Vermont'

I usually steer clear of the longer stories submitted, because I've found that they tend to be quite poorly written and are largely repetitive. This story, however, kept my attention with it's pleasing combination of erotica and an interesting tale, together with it being far better written/edited than a lot of others I've read. Now we need a sequel please, Mr/Miss/Mrs/Ms/Dr/Prof bgmisfun.

Perfect. Congratulations!

The story was very well written with believable persons functioning in more than one dimension and having emotions of a human kind. The build up with the reader wondering if there will be an erotic relation between the professor and the students, before changing direction of the story, is excelent.

For my own part I would be happier without the "mystic energy"-stuff in the final paragraphs, though. I would prefer to be more down to earth on earth Day.

Unfortunately, this story was unable to hold my interest for more than a few minutes at a time. I think it was due to the time and pov switching every couple paragraphs. Pretty okay story, I just don't think it's for me. Regardless, good luck in the contest!

I agree with others that u did a good job with the character development. Please do a part 2, I'm curious to see where this could go!

Very readabe an fun to read. Is there a part 2?

For all the mysticism in the story, the part about holding an NSF grant and needing results for tenure hits close to home for me...

just wish it had been in time to cast a vote.

Enjoyed reading your story! It is very believable and erotic. Very well narrated.