A Room with a View

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She kissed my mouth completely with hers, and then playfully slapped my ass with her tiny hand, and told me to get the shower ready for us while she stripped the bedding. She told me she'd put a fresh set of sheets on the bed after we showered so we had a clean bed to sleep on. After our shower, I helped her cover the bed with fresh sheets, and we quickly climbed in it and then cuddled naked together and gradually fell into a deep sleep wrapped comfortably inside each other's caressing arms.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
"Shutter / Shuttered" ???? Bloody Hell !!!!!!

The word is ShuDDer / ShuDDered !!!!

More than a dozen times here, and it's SO wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Over too soon!

Just wonderful but it did not last long enough.

Thank you for a lovely story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
If you're given 24 hours to live by the doctor, read this story. It'll seem like a year.

What long winded drivel. Learn to edit, and to write dialog. People do not address each other by name each time they open their mouths.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
utter verbose rubbish

This is a saga. Never ending one.

PapaMikePapaMikealmost 11 years ago
Bullwer-Lytton

Really? "The rubber of my uninterested tires leisurely embraced the old-fashioned cobblestone driveway" "My weary soul impetuously tried to soak in all of the stunning beauty that surrounded the exquisite home before turning off the engine."

You really ought to enter the Bullwer-Lytton Fiction Contest.

“It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents — except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.” — Edward George Bulwer-Lytton, Paul Clifford (1830)

Or maybe you're being paid by the word? Jay-sus, what a verbose disaster.

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